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Friday, October 19, 2018

Narrative - My Unusual "Pets"

Last term 8bh has been working on narrative writing. Narrative writing can be fictional or non fictional writing, we were asked to write first-person personal narratives about something that happened in our lives. I wrote about one of my unexpected pets that I had owned.




A few years back when I was the age of five I really, REALLY wanted wanted a
pet, I was a little afraid of dogs so I wanted a turtle or a pet goldfish, I never
expected to actually get a pet. I had never expected this type of pet, and to be
able to get three little monsters that I had to learn to take care of in a few
weeks. It was a really ‘Baad’ experience

It was a hot sunny day in february when my parents had come home with a
trailer, I was five at the time so I thought it was a peacock or a ostrich, after all
I was scared of birds as a kid. My parents had said that since I didn’t get a
birthday present and my sister wanted a pet animal they put it towards
themselves to buy us a pet. I didn’t know much about animals so I thought it
was a dog. My parents said we could see the animals so I was really excited,
before I could look my parents drove our car to the backyard and closed our
gate so the animal wouldn’t escape. They opened the gate to the trailer and I
wished it was a bird or dog. Turns out they had gotten us Sheep. My parents
said that each of these sheep were ours, I had a little girl, my brother and sister
both had boys. One of the sheep that was my sisters was really friendly and
thought I wanted to pet it. “Get this sheep off me!” ,I had screamed. After a
while that one sheep had followed me started to leave me alone. As soon as
that happened I ran inside after closing the gate and asked my parents why we
had three little monsters living with us now. “You and your sister wanted a pet
so we got you three” ,they had said.  It was becoming night so I changed my
clothes, washed my hands and went to sleep. The next morning I had woken up
to see a german shepherd chasing our now terrified sheep out of their cage and
chasing them around our house. I had screamed and told my parents what I
had just seen. My dad quickly ran outside and threw something at the german
shepherd so it would go away, after a while it finally left and we put the sheep
back into their cage, we then fed them and got on with our day.

After a while I had asked my parents why we had bought the sheep, “We got
these sheep to keep them as your temporary pet and also to fatten them up to
sell them later on” ,My dad had said. I was really annoyed that we had animals
at the moment even though we wanted a pet. This wasn’t the pet I wanted, this
was the last thing I wanted. A few weeks later I was still angry at the sheep and
for a while I had thought they were goats and that they would eat everything
with no remorse so I stayed away from them for a while.

Every morning we would have to feed them milk and they would follow us all
the time just so then they could get extra food. I would try to run away from
them, every day they would start stinking up because of the poop they made so
we had to wash them every day. The bad thing was that they hated water so
they always tried to run away from us. It was a hassle but they finally co
operated with us other than running away. When they started getting older they
would start eating more, which made them fatter. I always tried to stay away
from them because they wouldn’t leave me alone and always cuddled up to me.

A few months later the sheep had disappeared from our backyard, I started
panicking, trying to see where they could have gone. My parents saw me
panicking and told me that they sold the sheep so then they didn’t have to
shear it and also so then when they were older then they would kill it. I felt a
little bit of happiness but mostly sadness from the sheep going to die when they
were older. After all I had just named one Bob. I knew this was going to happen
but I didn’t want to believe it was true. It sadly was, I knew this was going to
happen so I didn’t want to be attached to the little monsters while they stayed
with us. The next day I went on like nothing happened until I realised, I never
said goodbye!

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