Animals, a living, breathing being. There are many different types of animals, most wild, some domestic. Many people own domestic animals like cats and dogs, most people have fights on what animal is better. It's obvious that cats are the more superior, here's why.
First cats are better than dogs because they don't cost as much as dogs. A average cat only needs food, water, some toys and a grooming brush. You don't need to wash a cat because they already groom themselves so all you need to do is brush them once or twice a week. A dog however needs to get washed every week because of how much dirt they gather on their bodies. Most times a dog will run outside and go into a muddy puddle and get mud into your house, cats however will stay inside away from the world and keep itself and your house clean. Cats won't shed as much as much as dogs because they always groom themselves. Dogs will just run everywhere and get dog hair all over your clothing.
Secondly cats won't bother you to go outside. If you are a introvert you can just stay inside to keep your cat alive. Your cat won't need to go outside because it has a litter box. Cats can also clean up after themselves so all you have to go is get rid of the dirty litter. Dogs always need to go outside to go potty, if you don't let it out then it will most likely go potty on your furniture which means more cleaning in the morning instead of doing your daily routine.
Lastly cats can be left alone for some hours of the day. Cats don't require as much love as dogs do. You could leave a cat with food, water and a toy and when you come back it will still cuddle up to you. Dogs however can't, if you leave a dog they will most likely trash your place while you are gone and act all innocent. A dog needs you to love them or they will be moody, cats just lay around until you come home and wait for you to come home.
There are many reasons why cats are better than dogs but these are the most important. Though some dogs are cuter than your average cat they are the most fierce animal that is related to many different types of feline species.
Hi Trisha.
ReplyDeleteI can clearly tell that you are supporting cats in this persuasive writing. Most of your points are very true, which makes me think you are right in some ways. I think that your writing will persuade many people to get a cat as their pet in the future. Great work Trisha, keep it up!
Hello Trisha!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your persuasive essay and I am so impressed at what you were able to create within the timeframe. You are specific with your word choice and you choose words which will enhance the meaning of the mood of your argument. This is an advanced skill, so well done to you.
I want you to really focus on where commas can go. You have used many of them in the correct places, but when you are reading, if you take a natural pause or breath, you should probably have a comma. An example would be when you say, however, in a few places.
I look forward to reading your final persuasive piece!
- Miss Birtch
Hi Trisha , My daughter is your teacher Miss Birtch and I was interested in reading some of the blogs from her students.
ReplyDeleteYour blog immediately caught my interest and I enjoyed reading all your thoughts on cats and dogs . Your blog convinced me that cats are far superior to dogs ! Do you have a pet at home ?
I will share a secret with you many of the ideas you expressed about cats are the same ones your teacher ( my daughter ) used to convince me to allow her to bring home a cat many years ago ! So now I have a cat named Prince here in Canada and you describe him perfectly in your blog !