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Friday, May 31, 2019

Prompt Writing

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2. The air turned black all around me

“Help me! Please” a voice had cried out, it had seemed to be behind me, I closed my eyes and turned around. Suddenly the air turned warm, almost as if  i was in a sunny forest. The wind was brushing against my face as I opened my eyes. “Hello?” I called out, I was hoping that the person would reply to me so then I could find out where I was. I didn’t get a reply but I could hear movement around me. Suddenly The air turned black all around me and I was at a cave. I could hear pained noises, as if someone was shot. I cautiously started to walk inside. The air felt musky, blood and copper making its way towards my nose. I could hear someone panting in the cave. As i walked further inside the cave I saw that there were a bunch of bullets covered in blood. I hoped it wasn’t real blood I turned left in the cave and saw a boy, no older than me sitting on the walls of the cave. He looked to be in bad shape, I looked at his stomach to see a deep gash with blood protruding out like a fountain, I looked closer and saw a bullet suck in his stomach. I look back at his face to see him, open eyed and staring at me. “Who are you?”  I asked. I didn’t know who he was but he seemed to be in a lot of trouble. He didn’t reply but seemed to be losing a lot of blood. I quickly ran to him, grabbed two sticks and ripped some of my shirt to reduce the blood pouring out of him. I realised that he was going to lose conscious soon so I had to act fast. “ I’m going to get the bullet out of your chest before your wound gets infected.” I say, he looks at me and nods. I grab the sticks and try to open his wound so then I could get the bullet out. He groans as soon as I put the sticks in place. I quickly stick my hand into the wound and try to get the bullet out.

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