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Wednesday, March 25, 2020

Mirror Mirror

Mirror Mirror

“ I think I look pretty average today, the grey hoodie works well with the headband I’m wearing. Though the purple butterfly doesn’t quite match the metallic gold the headband is made with.”

“It could work if you weren’t wearing those green pants, you would look like you dressed up in the dark if you kept them on.”

“What the hell? When could you start speaking? How can you speak? Also I know, I'm rushing here.”

“ I always could, I just didn’t feel like my opinion was needed at the time. Now it does, please change those hideous pants into those new black pants. You want to look your best for this friends hangout.”

“I feel like I’m getting pranked, you sound too much like my older sister Justine, I mean she is coming over for the holidays so I wouldn’t expect her to try and surprise me by doing this.”

“Trust me I’m not your sister, I didn’t even notice you had another sister, you never talked about her around me. Also change your pants please, I don’t want you to become a fashion fail.”


“I know I’m going to do that now, don’t rush me too much. I still don’t believe you though, it’s too much of a coincidence . I still need to figure out what shoes to wear with this. Now can you help me?”

“Wear the white off white sneakers, also touch up your hair, you don’t want everyone to know you were in a rush. Now go before you're late.”

“Alright alright, I’m going. We’ll have a chat after this about your ability to talk, I still don’t believe that's you. You sound a lot like Justine, and the fact that I’m the only one in my family unable to know when she’s coming is too suspicious.”

“Alright alright, just go to your hangout and have fun. We can talk about this later when you aren’t late now go”

3 comments:

  1. Hey Trisha,
    So cool that you are still posting to your blog over this time. I wonder if you could go in and tidy up this post. I can only read the first few words on each line and then it runs across. Remember if you are copy and pasting work from a doc it is best to copy (control c) and then paste without formatting (control shift v). Otherwise a screenshot also works.
    When it is fixed up send me a reply and I'll take another look!
    Look forward to hearing from you.
    Miss Morgan

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    1. Hi miss, Sorry about the words running off the page. I was hoping that the text formatting was going to be alright but as you saw, it wasn't. I've now fixed it so you are now able to read the dialogue.

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    2. Awesome, thanks for fixing it! I really enjoyed reading your story or is it a script? There were some moments when I literally laughed out loud! To take this even further you could create an animation to go along side it, that would be pretty cool!
      Thanks for sharing,
      Miss Morgan

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